A soul dies,
A happy bubble just burst,
Someone just stepped into the dark.
The rain poured on me.
Which are my tears,
which are the nightmares that slip down my face
which are the nightmares that slip down my face
and which are the rain drops?
Wrote this ages ago when tragedy struck my friend.
9 comments:
said the whole thing in just few lines...
hmmmm...... just want to say wow...
short n meaningful.. not cluttered with too many ideas.. just one focal point.. neither too revealing nor too secretive..
"A soul dies,
A happy bubble just burst,
Someone just stepped into the dark."
loved it..
beautiful lines....m moved....
sadly, for me, it rained when even my tears had dried up.
cheers!
@ bobby, nishi and mohu-
heartfelt thanks to all three.
and @ J- thanks to u too!
that is wonderful, azra
:( :( spell of sadness has been cast :( even in sadness you write so.... beautifully
Ah! tht was jst WOW!! beautiful!
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