Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Something that smells like sadness



A soul dies,
A happy bubble just burst,
Someone just stepped into the dark.

The rain poured on me.

Which are my tears,
which are the nightmares that slip down my face
and which are the rain drops?




Wrote this ages ago when tragedy struck my friend.

9 comments:

Bobby said...

said the whole thing in just few lines...

The Wanderer said...

hmmmm...... just want to say wow...

Mohua said...

short n meaningful.. not cluttered with too many ideas.. just one focal point.. neither too revealing nor too secretive..
"A soul dies,
A happy bubble just burst,
Someone just stepped into the dark."
loved it..

J said...

beautiful lines....m moved....
sadly, for me, it rained when even my tears had dried up.

cheers!

Raphael said...

@ bobby, nishi and mohu-
heartfelt thanks to all three.

Raphael said...

and @ J- thanks to u too!

et said...

that is wonderful, azra

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

:( :( spell of sadness has been cast :( even in sadness you write so.... beautifully

Matangi Mawley said...

Ah! tht was jst WOW!! beautiful!