Monday, August 23, 2010

untitled-part II

[this was the first draft. the last post was the polished one. or vice versa. not sure anymore!]


My insides are cold

I'm snowed in

I'm freezing within

It's all black rain, black snow,

Dark and cold.

 

            I'm freezing in the dark

            Crying, all alone

            Where's that warm fire

            That kindled my hopes and made me feel whole?

            Where did I lose my soul?

 

I'm stumbling, walking on my own

Without you beside,

I'm pitched against the dark.

Could've screamed_

Should've yelled_

Must've told you_

 

Don't let go,

I was cold before you came,

I'm cold again where I can't see your sun.

I'm frozen without your smiles

Patch me up and save me

Wake me before I go crazy.

 

Hurts me that you didn't know

Who I am and how I was before you.

Say it's not over yet,

Please don't give up.

I won't beg for you to stay,

But know I care and remain.

7 comments:

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

:(

*sigh*

Matangi Mawley said...

good one....!

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Raphael said...

@ matangi and truth- =) an extra bit o' sunshine to accompany since u guys motivate me so!

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Bobby said...

Strong but good!
btw hows lyf? :)

KG said...

Now that is intense. You have a good collection here.

et said...

Hey I was trying to sing that in the tune of some Avril song. Dunno why, may be it is the kind of images you use..
But then again, I feel so exhausted with the idea of holding on, that my mind so resists the feeling your lines give :)