[this was the first draft. the last post was the polished one. or vice versa. not sure anymore!]
My insides are cold
I'm snowed in
I'm freezing within
It's all black rain, black snow,
Dark and cold.
I'm freezing in the dark
Crying, all alone
Where's that warm fire
That kindled my hopes and made me feel whole?
Where did I lose my soul?
I'm stumbling, walking on my own
Without you beside,
I'm pitched against the dark.
Could've screamed_
Should've yelled_
Must've told you_
Don't let go,
I was cold before you came,
I'm cold again where I can't see your sun.
I'm frozen without your smiles
Patch me up and save me
Wake me before I go crazy.
Hurts me that you didn't know
Who I am and how I was before you.
Say it's not over yet,
Please don't give up.
I won't beg for you to stay,
But know I care and remain.
7 comments:
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*sigh*
good one....!
hi every person,
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@ matangi and truth- =) an extra bit o' sunshine to accompany since u guys motivate me so!
@anonymous- thank you! I'm honored! [u r not spam, r u?]
Strong but good!
btw hows lyf? :)
Now that is intense. You have a good collection here.
Hey I was trying to sing that in the tune of some Avril song. Dunno why, may be it is the kind of images you use..
But then again, I feel so exhausted with the idea of holding on, that my mind so resists the feeling your lines give :)
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